More ruthless chopping tonight and words are falling like leaves.
Apparently I like to repeat myself...a lot... Why say something once when you can say it in three different ways (one after another)?
Have also been cutting superflous words (I seem to have a particular fondness for 'really' and 'that')
I haven't been referring to my self-editing books, but some of the advice seems to have sunk in because I'm immediately spotting sloppiness in my prose and have been tightening and tightening. Will go back to the books later to check I haven't missed anything.
So far I haven't had to alter the plot or chop any characters (which I'm very relieved about) and the main thing I'm working on is pace. When I read through the 100 or so pages I'm editing now (there are another 200 pages to read when I'm done with these) I marked pages that seemed to drag or I found boring. As I edit I ask myself "Is this important to this scene and the story? Does it add anything?" If it isn't, or if it distracts the reader, or goes off on a tangent or is just me getting into my stride and writing about something that interests me rather than adds to the novel, then it gets cut. As a result I've cut quite a lot!
Am slightly concerned by how many words I've chopped already but, from chapters 10 onwards, the chapters are shorter and more succinct than the ones I'm editing now so hopefully the chopping will become a little less extreme. 20% done. 80% to do.
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